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remember getting mama in the rain
rebellion made me miss the train
her pick up truck lost oil
radiator fixin’ to boil
I was drunk down at the prison gate
mama you don’t need to hate
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sadness & humor combined in rhyme – worked very well here
Nicely put together, I like that last line.
That was cool I really liked it!
Interesting use of the words. A sad, but enjoyable read.
I agree, sadness & humor in a lovely rhyme… great job!
Very well put together little story.
Oh Wow! I loved your poem and the pictures weren’t too shabby either!! :D
David Allan Coe would think this was poetic and pretty damn cool.
So would Steve Goodman, if for one slight problem.
you didn’t mention anything at all about……
This is cute and funny :D
As ever, I love your pictures. Your piece sounds like the start of a great country music song. http://annbennett2.blogspot.com
It is the perfect country and western blog post. Here is the soundtrtack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8V1A-u7oo4
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