Chamblee54

Don’t Have To Call Me Darlin’

Posted in forty four words, Music, The Internet, Uncategorized by chamblee54 on March 22, 2013

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remember getting mama in the rain
rebellion made me miss the train
her pick up truck lost oil
radiator fixin’ to boil
I was drunk down at the prison gate
mama you don’t need to hate

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  1. humanTriumphant said, on March 22, 2013 at 2:40 pm

    sadness & humor combined in rhyme – worked very well here

  2. Renee TennisMcKinley (@2old2tap) said, on March 22, 2013 at 7:07 pm

    Nicely put together, I like that last line.

  3. Sam Edge, Writer said, on March 23, 2013 at 5:53 am

    That was cool I really liked it!

  4. lumdog said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:33 am

    Interesting use of the words. A sad, but enjoyable read.

  5. Dana said, on March 23, 2013 at 12:41 pm

    I agree, sadness & humor in a lovely rhyme… great job!

  6. Vanessa V. Kilmer said, on March 23, 2013 at 2:01 pm

    Very well put together little story.

  7. Linda Vernon said, on March 23, 2013 at 2:11 pm

    Oh Wow! I loved your poem and the pictures weren’t too shabby either!! :D

  8. Lance said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:01 pm

    David Allan Coe would think this was poetic and pretty damn cool.

    • chamblee54 said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:04 pm

      So would Steve Goodman, if for one slight problem.

      • Lance said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:20 pm

        you didn’t mention anything at all about……

  9. Draug419 said, on March 24, 2013 at 8:43 am

    This is cute and funny :D

  10. theroadfromhawaii said, on March 24, 2013 at 10:12 am

    As ever, I love your pictures. Your piece sounds like the start of a great country music song. http://annbennett2.blogspot.com


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